Ella
- Some parts still need editing to ensure that the footage flows properly
- Need more transactions between shots to improve this further as well as more between music
- The sound fits well with each section, however maybe not switch the music as often
Eddie
- Camera work is good an not too shaky
- Titles should be on for longer
- Music needs to flow better, more transactions so it isn't a jumpy
By getting feedback from a wider audience helps us to know exactly what we need to go back and improve so that are film opening is as good as it can be and is aimed at different people with different tastes.
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